My group felt that our short film needed more narrative in order for the film to be more successful. Therefore after brainastorming and collating some thoughts together, we came up with some additional scenes that would improve our creative project:
START: Matthew looks at photo of Sasha smiling, his sister, with tv on in background.
[the news is on in the background of the television with a news report about a girl who has been struck by a car in the early hours of the morning]
Extreme close-up of eyes watering, reaction shot of photo (which has Sasha with earphones in)
Possibly different shots of Sasha’s room with scattered music posters and photos on her wall.
Possible flashbacks of Matthew and Sasha listening to music together
NEXT SCENE: shows Matthew and Harley at the gravestone of Sasha
NEXT SCENE: Shows Matthew and Sasha’s parent saying that Matthew might as well have the iPod, the one thing she really loved.
Matthew then gets the iPod out asking himself ‘what is so special about the time machine?’
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